There is a proficient knowledge and understanding of media conventions used. I feel that you could add more analysis and evaluation of the music video stills. The evaluation of the CD digipak is very good. I also like the way in which the work is presented and your attempts to incorporate academic argument which is really thought through. Try to add one more post which addresses the question set. Action these points and please make the necessary additional to the task.
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