This is a concise and creative blog - the creativity and design is good.
You have produced some concise work with your blog entries. In order to develop the detail to your work you need to revise your class notes and add some detail to the comments you make, for example, look at the work on Dyer and Stars, Negus and the video as a promotional tool. The detail in your written work will heklp you reach a high notional grade for your research and planning - the concept is clearly there!
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